福建高考英語作文題目

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　　From the picture we can see a family of three walk(補(bǔ)語使用錯誤，應(yīng)該用walking) on a long redcarpet. The son who is the center of the picture, walks proudly (句式不完整，應(yīng)為walks proudlyforward). His father bends forward to help him draw his jacket while his mother, who is in front,is rolling out the carpet, with sweat dropping down.The picture showed (動詞時態(tài)錯誤，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時) that children are the center of each family of each family. As it's said (句式錯誤，as引導(dǎo)定語從句時用作關(guān)系代詞，在此處作從句的主語，it應(yīng)去掉), they are the hope of the whole family.Parents arrange everything for them, even their future. As a result, children rely on theirparents and have no independent thoughts. I think this is a serious problem to our society.This would destroy the future generation. For a long run, our China will be in danger.