安徽高考英語作文題目

　　2. 提出建議并說明理由。

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數(shù)120左右;

　　2. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;

　　3. 信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　參考詞匯：temper n. 脾氣，情緒

　　Hi Worried,

　　I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment,

　　Yours,

　　Jamie

　　安徽高考英語作文范文

　　Hi Worried

　　I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone willhave one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you don't have to worry somuch. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or sayanything you'll regret. Here are three useful tips:

　　First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger outwithout hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friendsas physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic aboutyour future. Such a positive attitude toward life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

　　I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

　　Yours，

　　Jamie

　　安徽高考英語作文點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　這篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、語言流暢，用詞得體。文章的第一段主要是對Worried同學(xué)的安慰，用生活的真理“everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong(每個(gè)人都會(huì)有一些生活不順心的時(shí)候)”告訴對方不必?fù)?dān)心。第二段就是對Worried同學(xué)提出的三點(diǎn)建議以及理由，邏輯非常清晰。

　　從要點(diǎn)上看，本文其實(shí)有一個(gè)弱點(diǎn)，那就是“表示理解”這個(gè)要點(diǎn)并沒有很直觀地體現(xiàn)出來，如果在題目給出的第一句話“I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment”后面寫出“Iabsolutely share your feeling”(我完全理解你的心情)就非常完美了。

　　從語言上看，文章雖然沒有用到很大的詞匯，但把基礎(chǔ)詞匯運(yùn)用得非常地道。如，let your anger out(發(fā)泄憤怒情緒)，lift your spirits(提振精神)，carry on as normal(像往常一樣好好的生活著)等。