重慶高考英語作文范文點評
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重慶高考英語作文范文
I really hope my words will be taken seriously, and I'll appreciate it if you respond soon! (句式使用地道優美)
Thank you !
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
重慶高考英語作文分析
I'm a student from Chongqing, China. I write (時態有誤,應用現在進行時) this letter to you toreport you the emergent situation of the Chinese Yangtze finless porpoise. Because of thehuman beings' influence, the number of this precious species promptly dropped (時態錯誤,應用現在完成時) to less than l000.
As far as I know, your foundation can help those species that are at the edge of extinction, Iwrite (動詞時態錯誤,應用現在進行時) this letter to you to ask for your generous donation toprotect (詞性錯誤,to是介詞,后跟名詞、代詞或動名詞) this endangered species. If you'reconvenient (漢語式表達,正確句子應為if it's convenient to you), would you please come toChina and have a close observation of the poor porpoises and give us aid and direction toprevent them from dying out completely?
Thanks for reading my letter and I'll appreciate to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua