天津高考英語作文題目

　　天津高考英語作文范文

　　I wish all of you would vote for me! (高級句式，主從復(fù)合句)

　　Thank you!

　　天津高考英語作文分析

　　My name is Li Jin. I'm outgoing and get on well with my classmates and teachers. I amskillful in (詞義使用錯誤，應(yīng)該用skilled) organizing all kinds of activities. I'd like to run for thevice president of the English club in our school (詞匯前后不一致，用university更好), I know as thevice president, I must do the following things for the club: I will try to make it known to everystudent and more students involved in the activities organized by the club. Also, to improveour English and get more students interested in English. I intend to hold (動詞有誤，應(yīng)用organize，意為“組織”) some activities at university, like lectures and English parties andinter-university activities (與前文重復(fù)，應(yīng)改為代詞ones) such as English debate competitions andspeech contests. I hope all of you vote me (句式錯誤，hope后的賓語從句表示將來的動作，應(yīng)用一般將來時態(tài);表示“選舉”時應(yīng)用動詞短語vote for).

　　Thank you!