高考英語優(yōu)秀作文(一)

　　2、提出你喜歡的欄目。

　　3、簡要說明理由。

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

　　2. 新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

　　3. 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　4. 參考欄目：欄目—column

　　Dear Mr. Green,

　　I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

　　Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

　　Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　高考英語優(yōu)秀作文點(diǎn)評

　　這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省今年的英語作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。

　　比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect! 況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。

　　高考英語優(yōu)秀作文(二)

　　一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：

　　1.地點(diǎn)：距白山入口處500米;

　　2.房間及價(jià)格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;

　　3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);

　　4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開放;

　　5.歡迎預(yù)定。

　　注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

　　高考英語優(yōu)秀作文點(diǎn)評

　　本文開門見山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞　1. provide v.提供 2. convenience n.便利

　　好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

　　very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。

　　評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

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