高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文(一)

　　3.Tracy 來(lái)電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見(jiàn)面取消

　　2)此事已告知Susan

　　3) 盡快回電

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　Mrs. Wilson,

　　I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　本文屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確，各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)不是簡(jiǎn)單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語(yǔ)句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語(yǔ)言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語(yǔ)言方面，要特別注意簡(jiǎn)潔明了，開(kāi)頭要開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山。

　　高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文(二)

　　【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，全國(guó)億萬(wàn)學(xué)生陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行，江蘇省1，100萬(wàn)學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。

　　教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：

　　每天鍛煉一小時(shí)

　　健康工作五十年

　　幸福生活一輩子

　　請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛伞?/p>

　　注意：

　　1、發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

　　2、詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　3、參考詞匯：陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)——a national student sports program;

　　教育部——the Ministry of Education

　　Good afternoon, everyone,

　　The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

　　The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

　　In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

　　Thank you!

　　高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語(yǔ)氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。

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　　好詞1.wage v.發(fā)動(dòng)2.aim v.瞄準(zhǔn)3. advocate v.提倡

　　好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

　　教育部提倡我們每天做一個(gè)小時(shí)的運(yùn)動(dòng)，能夠健康地活50年。

　　評(píng)析：advocate，其后接虛擬語(yǔ)氣，可以省略情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。

　　2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.

　　如果我們不進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)就不會(huì)很好。

　　評(píng)析：虛擬語(yǔ)氣。

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