高考英語作文高分模板一

　　1. 介紹購物情況

　　2. 反映存在問題

　　3. 提出解決方案

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數100詞左右

　　2. 可適當增加細節，使行文連貫

　　3. 開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞

　　可能用到的生詞：投訴complaint n.

　　【優秀滿分范文】

　　To whom it may concern,

　　I am one of your customers(顧客). I ordered(訂購)a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, thebooks were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To makematters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.

　　I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every rightto ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of theprocess of your dealing with my complaint.

　　Lookingforward to your reply.

　　Sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　高考英語作文高分模板二

　　下面是幅照片，表現了女兒為媽媽拿包的情景“to ease the pain in her back, I remove the heavy load from mom’s shoulder”

　　你短文應包括：1.描述照片的內容 2. 結合自身情況談談你的感想 3.舉例說明你能為家長肩負做些什么

　　范文：

　　The burden of students has been a hot topic for many years, but the load of parents has received little attention ,especially from their own children .

　　The picture shows us a touching moment when a little comes to greet her working mother . Realizing that her mother must be very tired after a day’s work , the girl helped to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response , the mother kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.

　　All that reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But , totally engaged in studies , I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying is the only thing I could do in return .Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing , bedroom cleaning ,or at least prepare breakfast myself , so as to share mom’s daily burden. The picture convinces me that it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student”.

　　高考英語作文高分模板三

　　最近，李岳被評為你們班的“每周之星”，請你根據她的事跡(在上周六下午，不顧天氣炎熱，為班級選購歌詠比賽服裝)，用英語寫一篇短文 1.李岳的事跡及對同學的影響 2. 你的評論 參考詞匯：singing contest . costume(服裝)

　　范文： Star student of the week

　　Li yue has been awarded the title of “star student of the week” for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday , Li yue went downtown and walked from one store to another ,looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms , she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting . Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts , we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.

　　Li yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example for us . Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.