機(jī)動靈活英語作文勝經(jīng)
按照高考統(tǒng)一標(biāo)準(zhǔn),只要能夠順利搞定出題者和改卷者,那么作文的分?jǐn)?shù)是一定居高不下的。從出題者的角度看,歷年高考考察的都是考生的最基本的交流能力,今年也不例外,因此考題會圍繞學(xué)生生活以及社會熱門話題進(jìn)行內(nèi)容上的考察;近年來,高考英語作文也開始給與學(xué)生更多發(fā)揮主觀能動性的機(jī)會,于是觀點(diǎn)對立型題目,圖表分析性題目,以及建議意見型題目也層出不窮。從改卷者的角度講,只要做到所有要點(diǎn)無一遺漏,語言正確流暢,無大型語法錯誤,書寫工整,并且沒有大量超出字?jǐn)?shù)或者字?jǐn)?shù)不足,則最終考生的得分都在第一檔次。
好的作文三個要素,思維,結(jié)構(gòu),語言。以2007年江西高考英語作文試題為例,題目為What Can We Do for Our School? 旨在對學(xué)校發(fā)展提出建設(shè)性意見,可從以下四點(diǎn)中任選兩個要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述(1 美化校園環(huán)境; 2 增強(qiáng)學(xué)習(xí)氛圍;3 愛護(hù)學(xué)校設(shè)施; 4 關(guān)心他人)。就考題而言,純屬建設(shè)性考題,四選二的出題方法給與了學(xué)生更多的揚(yáng)長避短的可能,使考生能夠發(fā)揮的更好,同時(shí)也避免了作文的雷同,也給大家在描述細(xì)節(jié)上足夠的空間發(fā)揮,屬比較科學(xué)的命題。此類題目的解除方法為三個步驟(就高考而言),即:what(建議是什么),why(為什么要提出建議),和how(具體怎么操作)。可見,題目已經(jīng)給出了關(guān)于what的提示,剩下學(xué)生要做的就是關(guān)于what的英文表達(dá),以及why和how的個性發(fā)揮。以下為參考范文,涵蓋了四個建議,考生可針對自身情況,做出選擇性的取舍。
What Can We Do for Our School?
Every one of us, as a member of our school, is a part of the whole, and something should be called upon to make our school a better place with more beautiful sceneries, enhanced study atmosphere, better-maintained facilities, and greater caring environment. As to a student, study should come first and that explains why an enhanced atmosphere has become critically essential. What should be done first is to encourage students to organize their study groups so that those doing well in their studies can have the chance to help those in need helping themselves. While most of the students put their scores of exams in the first place, it is more important to let them know how to care others as well as themselves, not only in their studies, but also in other aspects of their life; after all, students are human beings born with flesh and blood rather than examination machines made of iron and steel. It is the caring environment that encourages students to take better care of class facilities such as desks, blackboards, computers and so on; it is the caring environment that nurtures a wonderful campus with greater ocean of flowers and trees, soul-touching songs from birds, and crystal-like river beneath the romantic bridges. We firmly believe that harder as we try, that day will soon arrive, and most importantly the future is now.