英語四級寫作范文:大學畢業生應該租房還是買房
Write a composition entitled Should a College Graduate Rent or Purchase a House. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 隨著房價的逐年攀高,高校畢業生紛紛采取了租房和蝸居的不同態度;
2. 試分析租房和買房的利弊;
3. 簡述你對此的態度。
寫作步驟構思:
步驟1:
審題:這是一篇以租房和買房為主題的議論文。
步驟2:
引入話題:高校畢業生面臨著買房還是租房的選擇;
展開話題:論述雙方所持的不同理由;
話題結論:提出自己的看法,畢業后先租房,然后在合適的時機買房。
寫作范文:
Should a College Graduate Rent or Purchase a House
大學畢業生應該租房還是買房
With the soaring of the house price, the dream of having a house becomes unattainable for most of the new graduates. They face a dilemma of dwelling narrowly or renting a room.
隨著房價的飄升,擁有一所房子的夢想對大部分剛畢業的大學生來說變得可望而不可及。他們面臨著"蝸居"還是租房的兩難境地。
People holding the idea of purchasing a house think tbat the advantages of owning a house of their own outweigh another choice. On the one hand, according to the historical record, house price is expected to rise in the future. The possession of a house is expected to make profits in the long run and it is an effective way to avoid the shrinking of your property. On the other hand, a house belonging to yourself makes you feel safety and comfort. Nevertheless, dissenters do not agree with tbe idea. In their view, the house price is too high to afford for graduates. If graduates decide to buy a house, they are certain to increase the burden of their family.
想要買房的人覺得,擁有自己的房子其好處要遠大于租房。一方面,根據歷史記錄,預計房價在將來還會上漲。從長期來看, 擁有一所房子有望能獲利,這也是避免你的財產縮水的一種有效方式。另一方面,一所屬于自己的房子讓人感到安全舒適。然而,持不同意見的人不贊同這種觀點。在他們看來,房價太高了,畢業生承受不起。如果畢業生決定要買房,他們一定會增加他們家庭的負擔。
In my opioion, it is more advisable to rent a house during the first years than to buy a house because it is unwise to buy a house at such a high price. It is reasonable to save money and purchase a house at a suitable time. Surely, graduates can decide when to buy a house in accordance with their family condition.(223 words)
我認為,畢業后第一年租房要比買房更可取,因為以如此高的價格買房是不明智的。把錢省下來在合適的時間買房才是合理的。當然,畢業生可根據他們的家庭條件來決定什么時候買房。
句型解析:
They face a dilemma of dwelling narrowly or renting a room. 他們面臨著"蝸居"還是租房的兩難境地。
點評:這句話中活用了“dilemma”這個單詞,把“dwelling narrowly”和“renting a room”這種進退兩難的境地生動地顯示出來。
加分詞:
unattainable [ʌnə'teinəbl] adj.難到達的
possession [pə'zeʃn] n.財產
dilemma [di'lemə, dai'lemə] n.困境,進退兩難
in the long run 從長遠來看
hold the idea of... 持……觀點
dissenter [di'sentər] n.不同意者,反對者
outweigh [,aut'wei] v.比……重要
in accordance with 與……一致,依照