英語四級寫作范文:微博的流行
Write a composition entitled The Popularity of Microblog. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.近年來, "微博" 越來越流行,許多人利用"微博" 來表達心聲、交流想法、傳遞信息;
2."微博" 流行的原因;
3.目前"微博" 中可能存在的問題。
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寫作步驟構思:
步驟1:
審題:這是一篇以社會生活為主題的議論文。
步驟2:
引入話題:描述“微博”流行這種現象及其作用;
展開話題:原因:互聯網的普及;微博本身無技術要求;博客本身的特點;
話題結論:問題:抄襲、混亂;結論:有待發展成熟。
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寫作范文:
The Popularity of Microblog
微博的流行
In recent years, microblog has become very popular. More and more people have created their own microblogs. They use microblogs to reveal their inner voice, or collect and share thoughts and things they find interesting. In brief, microblog is an online instant notepad or a frequently updated personal page.
近年來,微博已經變得非常流行。越來越多的人已經建立了自己的微博。他們利用微博來表達心聲,或收集和分享他們覺得有趣的想法和事情。簡言之,微博是在線的即時筆記本或經常更新的個人主頁。
Why does microblog become so popular in such a short time? To begin with, it is the widespread of the Internet that provides a platform for the appearance and popularity of microblog. What's more, microblog has no fixed rules and need no professional knowledge and skills, which enables millions of people to create their own microblogs as their wishes and have a voice and connect with others. Finally, microblog covers all kinds of topics from daily life to political forums, from individual thoughts to world events. Among millions of rnicroblogs, you can always find something you are interested in.
為什么微博在這么短的時間內變得如此流行?首先,互聯網的普及為微博提供了出現和流行的平臺。此外,微博沒有固定的規則,不需要專業知識和技能,這使得數百萬人能夠按照自己的意愿創建微博,從而有自己的聲音,并能與他人聯系。最后,微博涵蓋了各種話題:從日常生活到政治論壇,從個人想法到世界大事。在數百萬的微博中,您總能找到您感興趣的。
However, microblog has some problems. On the one hand, plagiarism in microblog is not unusual. The protection of microblog copyright cannot be guaranteed. On the other hand, many microblog contents are in a mess, and some even include unhealthy things. Therefore, microblog still has a long way to go before it becomes mature.(201 words)
不過,微博也存在一些問題。一方面,微博中的抄襲現象并不少見,博客的版權保護無法保證。另一方面,許多微博的內容很混亂,有些甚至涉及不健康的東西。因此,微博還有很長的路要走才能變得成熟。
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句型解析:
They use microblogs to reveal their inner voice. 他們利用微博來表達心聲。
點評:這句話的加分點在“reveal”這個詞,意思是“展現,透露”。
Finally, microblog covers all kinds of topics from daily life to political forums… 最后,微博涵蓋了各種話題:從日常生活到政治論壇……
點評:這句話的加分 點在“cover”這個詞,意思是“涵蓋,包括,涉及”。
Therefore, microblog still has a long way to go before it becomes mature. 因此,微博還有很長的路要走才能變得成熟。
點評:這句話中活用了短語“a long way to go”,在寫作中要學會運用。
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加分詞:
reveal [ri'vi:l] v.露出,透露,展現
professional [prə'feʃənl] adj.專業的,職業的
inner voice 內心的聲音
forum ['fɔ:rəm] n.論壇,座談會
in brief 簡言之
plagiarism ['pleidʒərizəm] n.剽竊,剽竊物
instant ['instənt] adj.立即的,即時的
guaranteed [,gærən'ti:d] adj.保證的,擔保的
frequently ['fri:kwəntli] adv.頻繁地,屢次地
in a mess 混亂,亂七八糟
widespread ['waidspred] adj.普遍的
mature [mə'tʃur, mə'tur] adj.成熟的