英語四級寫作范文:大學生的心理問題
Write a composition entitled Psychological Problems of University Students. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.大學生的心理問題現在越來越普遍;
2.造成大學生心理出現問題的原因有哪些;
3.你有什么建議。
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寫作步驟構思:
步驟1:
審題:這是一篇以大學生的心理問題為主題的議論文。
步驟2:
引入話題:大學生心理問題很普遍,所以大學需要充分重視;
展開話題:引起這種現象的原因有很多方面;
話題結論:提出自己的建議和想法。
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寫作范文:
Psychological Problems of University Students
大學生的心理問題
Nowadays, psychological problems are becoming more and more common among the university students. It is high time the schools and the whole society paid their full attention to the psychological health ofthe university students.
如今,心理問題在大學生當中越來越普遍。是時候學校和整個社會應該重視大學生的心理健康問題了。
There are many reasons for this phenomenon. Some students are tortured by not getting along well with classmates or roommates, more than too often they tend to settle the misunderstandings over violence, or choose to hide their emotions, which always lead to more scrious psychological problems. Being frustrated in love can make students think of extreme ways of ending their misery, taking revenge or committing suicide might happen in that case. Poverty can deprive a student's confidence, making them feel inferior compared to their peers. And pressure from the study and the job-hunting competition are also contributors to all kinds of psychological problems.
心理問題這種現象出現的原因有很多。有些學生因與同學或室友相處不好而備受折磨,他們往往傾向于用暴力來解決這些誤解,要不就情愿隱藏自己的情感,這又總是導致更嚴重的心理問題。戀愛受挫可使學生想起用極端的辦法來結束自己的痛苦,在這種情況下就可能發生報復或自殺。貧困可能使學生失去信心,使他們在同伴面前感到自卑。來自學習和求職競爭的壓力也是各種心理問題的起因。
As a college student myself, I think we should try to be strong and reasonable enough to face the new challenges in our new life, and I sincerely recommend the schools to offer more psychological instructions.(173 words)
作為一名大學生,面對新生活的挑戰,我認為我們應該盡量做到堅強和理性。我誠心地建議學校提供更多的心理指導。
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句型解析:
Some students are tortured by not getting along well with classmates or roommates, more than too often they tend to settle the misunderstandings over violence, or choose to hide their emotions, which always lead to more scrious psychological problems. 有些學生因與同學或室友相處不好而備受折磨,他們往往傾向于用暴力來解決這些誤解,要不就情愿隱藏自己的情感,這又總是導致更嚴重的心理問題。
點評:本句詳細闡述了學生和同學或室友相處不好的情況下會出現的情形,本句用了兩個并列的動詞短語列出學生所采用的常見解決方法,含有一個which引導的非限制性定語從句。
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加分詞:
psychological [,saikə'la:dʒikl] adj.心理(學)的
revenge [ri'vendʒ] n.報仇,報復
pay one's full attention to 充分注意……
deprive [di'praiv] v.(of)剝奪,使喪失
phenomenon [fə'na:minən] n.現象
inferior [in'firiər] adj.較低的,次等的
torture ['tɔ:rtʃər] v.折磨,使痛苦
competition [,ka:mpə'tiʃn] n.競爭,比賽
violence ['vaiələns] n.暴力,暴行
contributor [kən'tribjətər] n.貢獻者,捐助者
be frustrated in 在……方面失敗
recommend [,rekə'mend] vt.建議,勸告