Write a composition entitled Students' Part-time Jobs. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.

　　1.大學生出去做兼職有好處，也有弊端;

　　2.你的觀點。

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　　寫作步驟構(gòu)思：

　　步驟1：

　　審題：這是一篇以大學生兼職為主題的解釋說明文。

　　步驟2：

　　引入話題：介紹兼職的好處，并舉例說明;

　　展開話題：指出兼職工作的缺點;

　　話題結(jié)論：提出自己的觀點，兼職因人而異，需要把握平衡。

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　　寫作范文：

　　Students' Part-time Jobs

　　學生的兼職工作

　　There are many advantages for a student to have a part time job. For instance, it helps him to realize that no success comes from nothing. It enables him to be independent and builds up his self-confidence. Therefore, part-time jobs cans get the students out of the ivory tower and give them the opportunity to know more of himself and of his personal value in society.

　　對于學生而言，兼職工作有很多好處。例如，它能夠使學生認識到，沒有付出就沒有收獲。這使他能夠獨立，樹立自信心。因此，兼職工作能夠讓學生們走出象牙塔，使他們有機會更多地了解自己及個人在社會中的價值。

　　As everything has two sides, the disadvantages can't be ignored. First, part-time jobs sborten students' study time. Second, some even become so preoccupied with making money that they can't focus their attention on studying. In the end, the students may fal1 behind or fail in their studies.

　　由于事物都具有兩面性，兼職工作的缺點亦不容忽視。首先，兼職工作縮短了學生的學習時間。其次，一些學生全身心投人到賺錢當中，這樣便無法將注意力集中在學習上。最后，學生可能會落后他人，甚至荒廢學業(yè)。

　　Personally, I believe students can choose to take up a job according to their own situation. The most important thing is for him to keep a good balance, put his study on top of the list and assign an adequate amount of time to it.(158 words)

　　就個人而言，我相信學生可按自身條件決定是否選擇兼職。最重要的一點是，保持一種良好的平衡狀態(tài)，將學業(yè)放在首位，安排足夠的時間用于學習。

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　　句型解析：

　　For instance, it helps him to realize that no success comes from nothing. 例如，它能夠使學生認識到，沒有付出就沒有收獲。

　　點評：這是一個賓語從句，從句中活用了一個習慣說法“no success comes from nothing”，譯為“沒有付出就沒有收獲”。

　　Therefore, part-time jobs cans get the students out of the ivory tower and give them the opportunity to know more …… 因此，兼職工作能夠讓學生們走出象牙塔，使他們有機會更多地了解……

　　點評：這句話中活用了兩個短語“get sb. out of”和“give sb. the opportunity”，這兩個短語首字母發(fā)音相同，給人一種節(jié)奏感和音韻美。

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　　加分詞：

　　independent [,indi'pendənt] adj.獨立的，自立的

　　build up 構(gòu)建，建立，樹立

　　the ivory tower 象牙塔

　　become preoccupied with 全神貫注

　　fall behind 落后

　　take up 開始從事