2. 我對這一現象的看法

　　【作文范文】

　　Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from the university several years later.

　　Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

　　Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.

　　【點評】

　　首段直接點題，說明現象;第二段分述三個優點，其中首句為讓步狀語從句，意思是“雖然可能帶來負面的后果，但總體上是有益的”;第三段呼應第二段，得出結論。

　　范文首段提出大學生讀雙學位這一普遍現象;第二段分三點進行論述，其中前兩點是優點，即學生會更加勤奮，并且有利于他們在激烈的求職市場中找到工作，最后一點是解釋可能帶來的學費問題并不嚴重;第三段下結論，呼應第二段。

　　第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示“大有希望”;第三段末句中的compel sb.to do sth.表示“迫使某人做某事”。