英語四級寫作范文:農民工的作用
Write a composition entitled The Role of Migrant Workers. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.農民工對城市建設所做的貢獻;
2.農民工涌入城市這一現象引發的問題;
3.你的觀點。
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寫作步驟:
步驟1:
審題:這是一篇以農民工為主題的議論文。
步驟2:
引入話題:指出農民工為城市的繁榮做出的貢獻;
展開話題:農民工涌入城市所帶來的問題;
話題結論:指出自己的觀點,要正確對待農民工問題。
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寫作范文:
The Role of Migrant Workers
As is known to all, migrant workers have made great contributions to the prosperity of cities. They are an indispensable part of our workforce. There is no doubt that many construction projects would be lack of manpower without them. In addition, a large number of migrant workers stimulate the consumption of food and daily items. All these are positive aspects of migrant workers in cities.
眾所周知,農民工對城市的繁榮做出了巨大的貢獻。他們是勞動大軍中不可或缺的一部分。毫無疑問,如果沒有他們,許多建設項目都將缺少男性勞動力。此外,大批的農民工也剌激了食品和日常用品的消費。這些都是城市中的農民工積極的作用。
However, as a popular saying goes, "Everything has two sides". The same is the case with migrant workers. First, they have trouble getting their children into child care centers and schools because they are unregistered residents in the city. Second, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money. Being not well-educated and incompetent, they are a potential threat to the peace and stability of the society.
然而,常言道:凡事都有兩面。農民工問題亦是如此。首先,他們很難將子女送到托兒所或學校,因為他們沒有城市戶口。其次,大部分的農民工涌入大都市僅僅是為了掙錢。他們受教育水平低,能力欠缺,對社會的和平與穩定是一個潛在的威脅。
In my opinion, in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one-sided to affirm everything or to negate everything. We should appreciate the great contribution made by them, and at the same time pay enough attention to the problems caused by them.(178 words)
我認為在評價農民工時,全盤肯定或全盤否定都是片面的。我們應感激他們所做出的巨大貢獻,與此同時,也應對他們所引起的問題給予足夠的重視。
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句型解析:
However, as a popular saying goes, "Everything has two sides". 然而,常言道:凡事都有兩面。
點評:這句話中活用了習語"Everything has two sides",在寫作中能正確運用這樣的習語,也是寫作的一個加分點。
Second, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money. 其次,大部分的農民工涌入大都市僅僅是為了掙錢。
點評:這句話中活用了一個動詞"swarm",好像蜂擁一樣,使得文章栩栩如生。
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加分詞:
migrant worker 農民工,外來工
prosperity [pra:'sperəti] n.繁榮
indispensable [,indi'spensəbl] adj.不可或缺的
unregistered [ʌn'rədʒistəd] adj.未注冊的,未登記的
swarm into 涌入
incompetent [in'ka:mpitənt] adj.無能力的
stability [stə'biləti] 穩定
in the appraisal of… 在評價……方面
one-sided [,wʌn'saidid] adj.單方面的,片面的