英語四級寫作范文:社會信任的缺失
Write a composition entitled Loss of Social Trust. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.社會信任危機日益嚴重;
2.社會信任缺失帶來的后果,怎樣解決這一問題;
3.做出總結。
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寫作步驟:
步驟1:
審題:這是一篇以社會信任缺失為主題的解釋說明文。
步驟2:
引入話題:指出社會信任缺失這一現象;
展開話題:從三個方面闡述社會信任缺失帶來的后果;從三方面敘述解決這一問題的辦法;
話題結論:找到滿意的解決方法很重要。
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寫作范文:
Loss of Social Trust
With the development of national economy, a worrying social problem also arises——people can trust each other less and less, especially strangers.
隨著國民經濟的發展,一個令人擔憂的問題也同時產生了:人們對彼此的信任越來越少,尤其是對陌生人。
This phenomenon will bring many unfavorable consequences. First and foremost, people's life will lose a lot of fun since they become cautious all the time. What makes matters worse, the general expense of doing things rises abruptly as a result of the fact that people don't want to help strangers. FinaUy, if this matter is not properly settled, it will pose a threat to national education.
這一現象會帶來許多不好的結果。首先,人們的生活會缺失掉許多樂趣,因為他們變得一直很謹慎。更糟糕的是,由于人們不想幫助陌生人,做事的總體成本突然地上升了。最后,如果這一問題得不到合理解決,會對國民教育造成危害。
It is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to deal with this problem properly. For one thing, the government should make all efforts to create a harmonious social atmosphere. For another, teachers should seize every chance to stimulate affection and unselfishness in the hearts of the students. FinaUy, the mass media should also play a positive role in restoring mutual trust.
我們早就應該號召四面八方的努力,來正確地解決這一問題。一方面,政府應該通過各方努力來創造一種和諧的社會氛圍。另一方面,老師們應抓住每個機會來激發學生心中的感情和慷慨。最后,大眾媒體也應該在恢復相互間的信任上發揮積極的作用。
No matter whether this problem is a natural result of social development, it is important that we find a satisfactory solution to it in this social transformation era. (181 words)
不管這一問題是否是社會發展的必然結果,在這個社會轉型的時代,我們找到一個滿意的解決方法很重要。
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句型解析:
…the general expense of doing things rises abruptly as a result of the fact that people don't want to help strangers. ……由于人們不想幫助陌生人,做事的總體成本突然地上升了。
點評:這句話不是很長,但句子結構卻比較復雜。首先這是一個因果狀語從句,主句是the general expense rises,as a result of及其后面的部分作句子的原因狀語;其次,在原因狀語中,還有一個由that引導的同位語從句作fact的同位語。
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加分詞:
cautious ['kɔ:ʃəs] adj.謹慎的,小心的
abruptly [ə'brʌptli] adv.突然地, 意外地
pose [pouz] v.造成,引起
stimulate [,stimjuleit] v.剌激;鼓勵
affection [ə'fekʃn] n.感情
unselfishness [ʌn'selfiʃnəs] n.不自私,慷慨
play a positive role in 發揮積極作用
restore [ri'stɔ:r] v.恢復,修復
transformation era 轉型階段