Write a composition entitled Harm of Fake Commodities. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.

　　1.目前社會上有不少假冒偽劣商品;

　　2.舉例說明假冒偽劣商品對消費者個人、社會等的危害;

　　3.消除偽劣商品的方法。

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　　寫作步驟：

　　步驟1：

　　審題：這是一篇以假冒偽劣商品為主題的解釋說明文。

　　步驟2：

　　引入話題：簡述目前社會上假冒偽劣商品猖狂這一現象;

　　展開話題：詳述假冒偽劣商品對消費者和社會的危害，并舉例說明;

　　話題結論：從兩個方面闡述消除偽劣商品的方法。

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　　寫作范文：

　　Harm of Fake Commodities

　　One negative aspect of China's rapid economic development is the phenomenon of fake commodities. It is reported that these commodities range from foodstuff, clothes to radios, and TV sets and even ,medicines.

　　中國經濟迅速發展產生的一個消極影響就是假冒偽劣商品的出現。據報道，從食品、服裝業到收音機和電視機甚至藥品都充斥著假冒偽劣商品。

　　Fake commodities are harmful in many ways. They have caused great loss and damage to consumers as well as to the society. For example，if someone buys some fake medicines，they may not cure hirn but may probably make his illness worse or even put an end to his life. Besides, fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers who produce the real products by making the consumers suspicious of these products，thus leading to social problems.

　　假冒偽劣商品存在很多危害。他們對消費者和社會都造成巨大的損失和傷害。例如，如果有人買了一些假藥，它可能不但無法治愈他反而使他的病情惡化，甚至導致他的生命走向終結。此外，假冒商品還可能使得消費者對這些產品產生懷疑，從而導致人們對生產真正產品的生產商失去信任，繼而引發社會問題。

　　It is high time to take actions to get rid of fake commodities. First，the government should perfect relevant laws conceming the manufacture and sake of commodities. Second, people should be advised how to tell the genuine commodities from the fake ones, and be encouraged to report to the relevant authorities in case they have bought fake commodities.(169 words)

　　現在是時候采取行動來消除假冒偽劣商品了。首先，政府應完善與商品的生產和銷售有關的法律。第二，應該告知人們如何分辨假冒偽劣商品， 并鼓勵人們在購買到假冒偽劣商品時上報到相關部門。

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　　句型解析：

　　Besides, fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers who produce the real products by making the consumers suspicious of these products，thus leading to social problems. 此外，假冒商品還可能使得消費者對這些產品產生懷疑，從而導致人們對生產真正產品的生產商失去信任，繼而引發社會問題。

　　點評：這個句子比較長，但結構比較簡單，這句話主句是"fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers, thus leading to social problems" who引導的從句作定語修飾manufacturers。

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　　加分詞：

　　range from…to… 從……到……范圍

　　take action 采取行動

　　foodstuff ['fu:dstʌf] n.食品

　　get rid of 擺脫， 除去

　　put an end to 結束，終止

　　relevant ['reləvənt] adj.有關的，相關的

　　manufacturer [,mænju'fæktʃərər] n.制造商

　　genuine ['dʒenjuin] adj.真正的，真實的

　　suspicious [sə'spifəs] adj.可疑的，懷疑的

　　be encouraged to 被鼓勵去……