英語四級寫作范文:我眼中的偶像崇拜
Write a composition entitled Idol Worship in My Eyes. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.簡要描述年輕人偶像崇拜的現象;
2.陳述崇拜偶像對年輕人的影響,包括利弊兩方面;
3.簡述你對追星、偶像崇拜的態度。
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寫作步驟:
步驟1:
審題:這是一篇以偶像崇拜為主題的解釋說明文。
步驟2:
引入話題:指出年輕人崇拜娛樂圈偶像的現象;
展開話題:從兩個方面說明偶像崇拜的好與壞界限不明顯;
話題結論:表達自己對偶像崇拜這一現象的看法。
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寫作范文:
Idol Worship in My Eyes
Most people have their idols, be it scientists or pop singers. Many youngsters, in particular, worship stars in the sports and entertainment field, who catch most ofthe public attention.
大部分人都有他們的偶像,無論是科學家還是流行歌星。尤其是許多年輕人,崇拜那些體育界和娛樂圈最吸引大眾注意力的明星。
It is hard to say whether idol worshipping is good or bad, for it is not a black-and-white issue. For one thing, idols may inspire they young people in different ways. Usually, these public figures walk into the spotlight after a great amount of hard work, therefore they set up role models as talented and industrious persons. But for another thing, it may not be wise to blindly admire anyone. Some youngsters try to imitate their idols——dressing, pronunciation, life style and everything. This is dangerous, because to err is human and stars have their weaknesses as well, and in some cases, even scandals.
很難說偶像崇拜是好還是壞,因為這不是個黑白分明的問題。一方面,偶像可以通過不同方式啟發年輕人。通常,這些公眾人物是在大量努力工作之后才走到聚光燈下的,因此他們作為有天賦和勤勞的人,樹立起了典范。但是從另一方面來說,盲目崇拜任何人也許都是不明智的。一些年輕人試圖模仿他們的偶像一一服飾、發音、生活方式和所有事情。這很危險,因為"人非圣賢孰能無過",明星也有他們的缺點,而且在某些情況下,甚至會有丑聞。
As I perceive this phenomenon, there is nothing wrong with idol worshipping inherently. What matter are the aspects in which we admire them and to what extent it goes. Even if a certain star always presents a good public image, the "worship" should not go to such extreme as pure imitation, otherwise there will be a lot of "carbon copies" lacking individuality. (196 words)
根據我對這一現象的看法,崇拜偶像從本質上沒有什么不對的。真正重要的是我們崇拜他們什么方面,以及崇拜到了什么程度。即使某個明星展現的公眾形象一直很好,這種"崇拜"也不應該走向完全模仿的極端,否則就會出現很多缺乏個性的"一模一樣的東西"。
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高分句型解析:
This is dangerous, because to err is human and stars have their weaknesses as well… 這很危險,因為"人非圣賢孰能無過",明星也有他們的缺點……
點評:這句話中活用了習語"to err is human",表示“人非圣賢孰能無過”,在寫作中正確運用習語成語,是文章高分的一個因素。
…otherwise there will be a lot of "carbon copies" lacking individuality. ……否則就會出現很多缺乏個性的"一模一樣的東西"。
點評:這句話中活用了短語"carbon copies",這個短語本意指“復定的副本”,在本文指缺缺乏個性的人,通過"carbon copies"這一形象的描述,使得文字變得栩栩如生。
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加分詞:
black-and-white adj.黑白分明的
to err is human 人非圣賢,孰能無過
a great amount of 大量的,許多的
scandal ['skændl] n.丑聞,流言斐語
industrious [in'dʌstriəs] adj.勤勉的,刻苦的
inherently [in'hirəntli] adv.天性地,固有地
imitate ['imiteit] n.模仿
carbon copies 一模一樣的事物