英語四級寫作范文:我對跳槽的看法
Write a composition entitled My View on Job-Hopping. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作,因為……
2.有些人喜歡經常更換工作,因為……
3.我的看法。
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寫作步驟:
步驟1:
審題:這是一篇以跳槽為主題的議論文。
步驟2:
引入話題:描寫喜歡固定在一個工作上的現象及原因;
展開話題:描述相反的觀點:有人認為改變意味著進步;
話題結論:闡明自己的立場,要具體情況具體分析。
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寫作范文:
My View on Job-Hopping
Many people are inclined to do one job in their lives. In their opinions, people who change their jobs frequently are superficial and tactless . They believe that the only way to success is to stick to one job, because constant practice in a professional field helps make an expert.
許多人傾向于一生只從事一項工作。在他們看來,那些頻繁換工作的人很膚淺,不明智。他們相信,成功的唯一方式就是固定在一個工作上,因為在專業領域的持續工作能幫助你成為專家。
But there are still many people who don't agree. They argue that change means progress. If you are not satisfied with your present job or you have some better opportunities, of course you have the right to replace it with a more challenging and better paid one. Every change is a step to further success. This idea may be the reason why they change their jobs so ofter.
但是也有人不同意這種觀點。他們爭辯說改變意味著進步。如果你對當前的工作不滿意,或者你有一些更好的機會,當然你就有權利用更有挑戰而且薪水更高的工作來換掉它。每一個改變都是向成功邁進了一步。這種想法也許是他們如此頻繁換工作的原因。
For my part, I think it reasonable to change your job if you have a better opportunity. But once you have found a position where you can fully display your ability, it is advisable to settle down to it and put all your efforts into it. Only in this way, can you get the true joy of achieving your goal and improving your capability. (181 words)
依我看來,我認為如果你有更好的機會,那么你有理由換工作。但是一旦你已找到能充分發揮你能力的職位,安下心來,并把你所有的努力用在上面,才是可取的。只有通過這種方式,你才能在實現目標和提升能力上得到真正的快樂。
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高分句型解析:
Every change is a step to further success. 每一個改變都是向成功邁進了一步。
點評:這句話短小精悍,富有哲理,其實生活中大家都要善于改變,接受新事物。
Only in this way, can you get the true joy of achieving your goal and improving your capability. 只有通過這種方式,你才能在實現目標和提升能力上得到真正的快樂。
點評:這是一個倒裝句,副詞only置于句首,強調方式狀語、主語要進行部分倒裝。
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加分詞:
be inclined to 傾向于
stick to 遵守,堅持;保留
frequently ['fri:kwəntli] adv.頻繁地,常常
professional field 專業領域
superficial [,su:pər'fiʃl] adj.膚淺的;表面的
be (not) satisfied with 對……(不)滿意
tactless ['tæktləs] adj.不明智的,不得體的
challenging ['tʃælindʒiŋ] adj.有挑戰性的
settle down 安定下來