下面小編將這次四級作文其中一篇人對電腦產生的影響范文中的亮點表達進行總結提練：

　　【參考范文】

　　首段：As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent onthe computer whether in working and playing or at home and sleeping. The impact of thecomputer on daily life is such seriousness that it is high time we paid attention to it.

　　【亮點表達】

　　1. 如圖清晰的描述了：As is clearly depicted...

　　2. 一系列圖畫：a series of / a set of

　　3. 過分地依賴于：be excessively dependent on ...

　　4. 無論...還是....：whether ...or ...

　　5. 電腦對日常生活產生的影響：the impact of the computer on daily life

　　6. 如此....以致于...：such... That...

　　7. 該到了干...的時候了：it is high time ...

　　展開段：In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called netfriends always take priority over our family and friends in real life. The bulk of each dayincluding our time and energy is spent on the Internet. What’s more, the Internet deprives usof the delight in communication with others. When taking to someone by us, we can heartheir voices, see their expressions, and even hold their hands if we would like to. Last but notleast, the computer will lead to a decline of our skills of face-to-face communication. Thus wemay feel embarrassed and find it harder to communicate with people around us.

　　【亮點表達】

　　1. 首先....其次...最后：In the first place/what’s more/last but not least

　　2. 由于：due to...

　　3. 優于...勝于...：take priority over...

　　4. 每天的大部時間：the bulk of each day

　　5. 剝奪了某人關于....：deprive sb of sth

　　6. 與他人溝通：communication with...

　　7. 面對面的溝通：face-to-face communication

　　8. 感覺到很尷尬：feel embarrassed

　　結論段：To sum up, we shouldn’t be dependent on the computer excessively. No matter howconvenient and speedy it is, we should remember the advantage of face-to-facecommunication.

　　【亮點表達】

　　1.總結：to sum up

　　2.無論多么的方便與快捷：no matter how convenient and speedy

　　3.學習任何知識需要日積月累，對于一門英語這門語言來講更是如此，以上亮點表達希望各位考生朋友能夠熟記在心。