此外，我們一定要認真審題，題干里要求要對圖片作簡要的描述，這點很多同學很容易忽略掉，會按話題作文來完成。這里就是閱卷老師扣分的點。然后第二段從反面展開分析為什么電腦會給人帶來不好的影響。在行文時，要注意文章的層次和邏輯梳理。

　　【參考范文】

　　As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent onthe computer whether in working and playing or at home and sleeping. The impact of thecomputer on daily life is such seriousness that it is high time we paid attention to it.

　　In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called netfriends always take priority over our family and friends in real life. The bulk of each dayincluding our time and energy is spent on the Internet. What’s more, the Internet deprives usof the delight in communication with others. When taking to someone by us, we can heartheir voices, see their expressions, and even hold their hands if we would like to. Last but notleast, the computer will lead to a decline of our skills of face-to-face communication. Thus wemay feel embarrassed and find it harder to communicate with people around us.

　　To sum up, we shouldn’t be dependent on the computer excessively. No matter howconvenient and speedy it is, we should remember the advantage of face-to-facecommunication.

　　【亮點表達】

　　1. 如圖清晰的描述了：As is clearly depicted...

　　2. 一系列圖畫：a series of / a set of

　　3. 過分地依賴于：be excessively dependent on ...

　　4. 無論...還是....：whether ...or ...

　　5. 電腦對日常生活產(chǎn)生的影響：the impact of the computer on daily life

　　6. 如此....以致于...：such... That...

　　7. 該到了干...的時候了：it is high time ...

　　1. 首先....其次...最后：In the first place/what’s more/last but not least

　　2. 由于：due to...

　　3. 優(yōu)于...勝于...：take priority over...

　　4. 每天的大部時間：the bulk of each day

　　5. 剝奪了某人關于....：deprive sb of sth

　　6. 與他人溝通：communication with...

　　7. 面對面的溝通：face-to-face communication

　　8. 感覺到很尷尬：feel embarrassed

　　1.總結：to sum up

　　2.無論多么的方便與快捷：no matter how convenient and speedy

　　3.學習任何知識需要日積月累，對于一門英語這門語言來講更是如此，以上亮點表達希望各位考生朋友能夠熟記在心。