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英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文
Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要評(píng)論的事物或觀點(diǎn)(general);
(2) 具體描述這個(gè)事物或者觀點(diǎn)(或者是我對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。
Paragraph 2: (1) 作者對(duì)該現(xiàn)象貨問(wèn)題的基本看法，即文章的論點(diǎn)句;
(2) 支持性的細(xì)節(jié)分論點(diǎn)(至少兩點(diǎn));
(3) 本段總結(jié)(可以省略)。
Paragraph 3: (1) 總結(jié)全文，定下結(jié)論(通常為我的對(duì)策或看法)。
四級(jí)作文試題2000年1月
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用(tuition and fees)可以通過(guò)多多種途徑解決。
2. 哪種途徑適合我(說(shuō)明理由)。
How I Finance My College Education
How I Finance My College Education
第一段：首先，應(yīng)該是用一種描述性的語(yǔ)言引出討論的重點(diǎn)：
Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.
第二段：有多種的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.銀行貸款 3.打工掙錢(qián)
第二段主題句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.
第二段分寫(xiě)：
In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.
In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.
What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.
第三段：我所贊同的方法(闡述原因，為何不選其他的方法)。
Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.
For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.
For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.
In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.
Therefore /So /Hence,.....
使文章富有表現(xiàn)力的手段：
1、使用有難度的詞匯;
2、使用形容詞修飾名詞，用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或整個(gè)句子;
3、使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài);
4、使用倒裝句;(not only... but also...;only...)
5、盡可能地使用名詞，而不是習(xí)慣中的動(dòng)詞和形容詞。
綠化我們的城市
第一段：
近年來(lái)，隨著工商業(yè)的迅猛發(fā)展，許多大城市中樹(shù)木的數(shù)量大幅度降低。人們作出各種努力防止樹(shù)木被砍伐，但是，認(rèn)識(shí)到綠化城市也同樣重要。
句型變化
A. (1) We can imagine the beautiful surroundings. (2) There are many trees along the streets. (3) There is a clean river in the city. (4) There are many fishes in the river. (5) There are willow trees on the one side. (6) There are some pieces of grassland on the other side. (7) There are many flowers on them.
B. (1) Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we have made our cities greener. (2) Green trees line the streets. (3) A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound. (4) On the one side stand rows of willow trees. (5) On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.
1. There be...
1) a. There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films.
b. Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.
2) a. There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages.
b. Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.
2. If
1) a. If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference.
b. Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.
2) a. If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good result.
b. The application of book knowledge alone will not bring you good result.
3) a. If there is no pollution, man can certainly survive.
b. Man can certainly survive in the world where there is no pollution.
3. In order to
1) a. In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve, we must take an immediate step.
b. An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.
2) a. In order to build a stable and prosperous nation, people should make new efforts.
b. New efforts will bring ...
4. More and more
1) a. More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV.
b. People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.
2) a. More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle.
b. The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.
3) a. More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.
b. Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years.
4) a. More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy.
b. There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.
5) a. More and more trees have disappeared in the city.
b. There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.
社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題
寫(xiě)作練習(xí)：Jobs for Graduates
1) 大學(xué)生難找工作
2) 原因很多
3) 解決的辦法
With the fantastic development of modern society, people in ever increasing numbers have access to tertiary education (高等教育). As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.
范文23：Nowadays, college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job. Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.
The job market for college students/ graduates is getting tighter and tighter. According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000. Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs?
第二段細(xì)節(jié)論證
分析原因：
1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned...
2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to ...
3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in ... mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors ...
Several years ago, many students were enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand. Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country. Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as ...
國(guó)家制定法律法規(guī)
個(gè)人接受教育
(2) 具體描述這個(gè)事物或者觀點(diǎn)(或者是我對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。
Paragraph 2: (1) 作者對(duì)該現(xiàn)象貨問(wèn)題的基本看法，即文章的論點(diǎn)句;
(2) 支持性的細(xì)節(jié)分論點(diǎn)(至少兩點(diǎn));
(3) 本段總結(jié)(可以省略)。
Paragraph 3: (1) 總結(jié)全文，定下結(jié)論(通常為我的對(duì)策或看法)。
四級(jí)作文試題2000年1月
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用(tuition and fees)可以通過(guò)多多種途徑解決。
2. 哪種途徑適合我(說(shuō)明理由)。
How I Finance My College Education
How I Finance My College Education
第一段：首先，應(yīng)該是用一種描述性的語(yǔ)言引出討論的重點(diǎn)：
Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.
第二段：有多種的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.銀行貸款 3.打工掙錢(qián)
第二段主題句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.
第二段分寫(xiě)：
In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.
In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.
What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.
第三段：我所贊同的方法(闡述原因，為何不選其他的方法)。
Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.
For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.
For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.
In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.
Therefore /So /Hence,.....
使文章富有表現(xiàn)力的手段：
1、使用有難度的詞匯;
2、使用形容詞修飾名詞，用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或整個(gè)句子;
3、使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài);
4、使用倒裝句;(not only... but also...;only...)
5、盡可能地使用名詞，而不是習(xí)慣中的動(dòng)詞和形容詞。
綠化我們的城市
第一段：
近年來(lái)，隨著工商業(yè)的迅猛發(fā)展，許多大城市中樹(shù)木的數(shù)量大幅度降低。人們作出各種努力防止樹(shù)木被砍伐，但是，認(rèn)識(shí)到綠化城市也同樣重要。
句型變化
A. (1) We can imagine the beautiful surroundings. (2) There are many trees along the streets. (3) There is a clean river in the city. (4) There are many fishes in the river. (5) There are willow trees on the one side. (6) There are some pieces of grassland on the other side. (7) There are many flowers on them.
B. (1) Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we have made our cities greener. (2) Green trees line the streets. (3) A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound. (4) On the one side stand rows of willow trees. (5) On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.
1. There be...
1) a. There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films.
b. Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.
2) a. There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages.
b. Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.
2. If
1) a. If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference.
b. Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.
2) a. If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good result.
b. The application of book knowledge alone will not bring you good result.
3) a. If there is no pollution, man can certainly survive.
b. Man can certainly survive in the world where there is no pollution.
3. In order to
1) a. In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve, we must take an immediate step.
b. An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.
2) a. In order to build a stable and prosperous nation, people should make new efforts.
b. New efforts will bring ...
4. More and more
1) a. More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV.
b. People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.
2) a. More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle.
b. The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.
3) a. More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.
b. Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years.
4) a. More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy.
b. There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.
5) a. More and more trees have disappeared in the city.
b. There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.
社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題
寫(xiě)作練習(xí)：Jobs for Graduates
1) 大學(xué)生難找工作
2) 原因很多
3) 解決的辦法
With the fantastic development of modern society, people in ever increasing numbers have access to tertiary education (高等教育). As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.
范文23：Nowadays, college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job. Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.
The job market for college students/ graduates is getting tighter and tighter. According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000. Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs?
第二段細(xì)節(jié)論證
分析原因：
1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned...
2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to ...
3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in ... mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors ...
Several years ago, many students were enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand. Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country. Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as ...
國(guó)家制定法律法規(guī)
個(gè)人接受教育