英語六級(jí)滿分作文原文

　　Here, in the picture, a concert is going on. The pianist is supposed to be playing Beethoven'ssymphony when, all of a sudden, a man with a tie stood up, talking loudly over his mobilephone and telling his friend that he was attending a concert of classical music. The audienceshuddered with panic and the pianist was nearly shocked to death.

　　It is not infrequent that the above scene happens in public places. True, human beings havethe right to enjoy modern civilization, nevertheless, should they know how to conductthemselves in the modern civilized society?

　　英語六級(jí)滿分作文點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　本文為一篇圖畫作文, 文體為議論文。作者就“ 移動(dòng)電話”發(fā)表自己的看法。文章開頭以“ 人類的創(chuàng)造力是無限的”一句引出移動(dòng)電話的發(fā)明, 繼而在第二段中描述了移動(dòng)電話的迅速發(fā)展。接著第三段筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn), 以However引出一段反面文章, 略述移動(dòng)電話的負(fù)面影響是發(fā)明者始料不及的, 由此切入畫面以為典型一例。結(jié)尾一段是作者的忠告— 享受現(xiàn)代文明也得講文明。

　　英語六級(jí)滿分作文高分表達(dá)

　　creativeness n. 創(chuàng)造性

　　boundless a. 無限的

　　means of commu nication 通訊工具

　　not fixed in one place 不固定在一處

　　facilitate v. 使容易

　　township enterprise 鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)企業(yè)

　　journalist n. 記者

　　people of all trades and professions 各行各業(yè)人士

　　nowhe re we do not... 我們無處不……(雙重否定)

　　manufacturer n. 制造商, 廠家

　　wor ry one's brain into 絞盡腦汁, 費(fèi)盡心機(jī)

　　multi-functional a. 多功能的

　　satisfy one's needs 滿足……要求

　　It is a pity that... 遺憾的是……

　　negative effect 負(fù)效應(yīng)

　　merit n. 業(yè)績, 功績

　　abuse n. 濫用

　　aircraft mechanism 航空裝置

　　incessantly interrupted 不斷被打斷

　　concert n. 音樂會(huì)

　　pianist n. 鋼琴家

　　Beethoven's symphony 貝多芬交響樂

　　all of a sudden 突然

　　shuddered with panic 嚇得發(fā)抖