六級英語寫作范文

　　Neither Brand C nor Brand D is a good choice because the former has a very good nutritionalrating but not a good taste; while the latter has an excellent taste but only a fair nutritionalrating.

　　Being less nutritional and tasteful, Brand B is not as good a choice as Brand A, despite theirsimilar costs. So, that leaves only Brand A. It is true that Brand A has the highest price, but Ibelieve that most of the schools would not really mind paying a little bit more money for schoolchildren's better health.

　　六級英語寫作范文解析

　　本文是一篇圖表作文, 要求按圖表中提示的信息為小學生選擇一種牌子的面包。本題曾為一托福考題, 作者“ 借題發揮”根據自己的思路作文。這類題型的寫作多用比較和對照, 這也是托福寫作的一大特點。此外, 這類作文的結論不受限制, 完全 可按作者的意圖來寫, 但必須有充足的理由。本文中, 作者首先分述營養與口味兩大因素并加以比較和權衡, 而價格則不在話下。四者相比后決定選A。然后在第三段中排除C 和D, 最后 A 和B 相比, 決定選擇最好的。

　　六級英語寫作范文高分短語

　　take... into account 考慮……

　　at an age when... 在……的年齡

　　malnut rition n. 營養不良

　　hinder v. 防止，妨礙

　　regardless of 不管, 不顧

　　despite prep. 盡管

　　It is true that... 誠然