英語六級寫作范文精講:自行車旅行
There ar e many ways of t raveling . People may t ravel by plane if they want to t ravel far and r each their destination in a shorter time . I t is the most comfor table but expensive way . Most people t ravel by t r ain because it is a less expensive way but the compar tments a re cramped and stuffy . Bus journey is a cheape r way but it is spent on nar row, bumpy roads which ar e crowded with t raffic . Trip s by ship may be the cheapest and most comfort able way but it takes too much time .
I like tr aveling by bike . I can set out when I like and stop when I like . I can go whereve r I like so that I can enjoy delightful spots ra rely visited by other t ravele rs . When I feel tired , I sit down by the bike and have a good r est . Besides , I can save much money for tickets and much time in waiting for the t rain or bus . I can cover more places by riding a bike than going on foot .
Traveling by bike is good to health . It is really a sor t of good exercise to st rengthen one’s muscles and to test one’s will . Moreover , it brings no pollution to the air . So it helps to clean the atmosphe re .
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結構分析:
·旅游的方式有多種
* Plane
* Train
* Bu s
* Ship
·我愛騎車出游
* Convenient
* Acces sible to any place
* Save money and time
·騎車出游有益健康
* St rengthen one’s will
* Test one’s will
* No pollution
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內容分析:
本文是一篇簡單的議論文, 文中首先列舉了多種交通工具并說明優缺點, 然后落實到作者自己的喜好———騎車出游, 接著說出喜好的理由。最后一段為總結。本文篇幅不長, 但層次清楚, 又很連貫, 每一段的第一句均為主題句, 段中意思統一, 不跑題。本文應是一篇四級作文。
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萬能句型:
destination n . 目的地
compa rtment n . 車廂
cr amped and stuffy 擁擠
nar row, bumpy roads 狹窄而顛簸的路面
set out 出發
st rengthen one’s muscle and test one’s will 增強體魄鍛煉意志