目前人類對太空有了更多的探索

　　這樣做的意義

　　你認為未來的前景如何

　　參考范文

　　At present space exploration has been on wings. The year of 2007 solely has witnessed a sharp increase in the money spent on space exploration to an astonishing amount of $ 850,000,000, with scientists in many parts of the world pooling time and efforts to research the space, launch satellites, establish space stations, and even walk on the moon.

　　Space exploration is of great significance. To begin with，through space exploration，we human being may uncover the unknown resources of the universe, which endows us with knowledge about the origin of life. What’s more，space exploration also provides some prac­tical application in fields such as media communication, biological and chemical industry, which，in a long run, will undoubtedly bring ffleat benefits to our daily life. In addition，it offers a platform for nations to cooperate through participation in joint breakthrough.

　　In the near future，more nations will get involved in the course of space exploration. Some questions having intrigued human throughout the centuries are to be in the list of solution.

　　快捷構思

　　第一段:描述現象，引人該段中心“目前人類對太空有了更多 的探索”。而后“一句話”數例為具體現象展示,說明 花在太空探索上的資金很多。

　　第二段:直接展現該段中心“這樣做的意義”，接著用uncover the unknown resources of the universe 和 provides some practical application in fields such as media communica­tion, biological and chemical industry 兩點來支持。

　　第三段:直接展現自己的觀點，并提出一個簡要的原因，不作 更深層次的展開。

　　加分短語

　　1.with scientists in many parts of the world pooling time and efforts to research the space, launch satellites, establish space stations，and even walk on the moon.(高分句式， research the space，launch satellites, establish space stations 和walk on the moon四個并列短語的運用，增加了文章亮 點。)

　　2. be of great significance 很重要(優于常用的表達:very signifi­cant)

　　3.in a long run從長遠看來

　　4.bring great benefits to 帶來很大好處

　　5.get involved in 涉及，牽涉