英語六級寫作真題練習:幸運數字真的能帶來好運嗎
You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below :
1.有些人認為某些數字會帶來好運
2.也有些人認為數字和運氣無關
3.試說明你的看法
參考范文
As regards lucky numbers, there has been a heated discussion amons the general public in our society. Some people believe that lucky numbers will bring them good luck. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, a high proportion (86. 5 percent) of people spare much money to get their telephone numbers or car numbers to include the number “8",which, for them, means making a fortune.
By contrast, others hold that such kind of idea only caters to psychological need and is purely misleading. Numbers alone can never bring good luck to a person at all without his real efforts.Instead, many count their good fortune on lucky numbers just to get a disappointing result.
As far as I am concerned,I would lend my support to the second opinion because I firmly believe that “ Opportunities are only for the prepared mind”. Only when every member of the society makes efforts to win luck with his own hands can we expect him to forget about the lucky numbers.
一句話點評
毫無疑問,第一段的一個百分比吸引了閱卷老師的眼球。 conduct, a high proportion of, spare much money 等詞和短語的運用, 給閱卷老師留下良好的第一印象。注意:該篇文章是個例外,將“一 句話”放在了第一段,是因為很容易舉出數字的例子來說明“有些人 認為某些數字會帶來好運”的論點,傳統思維中,一想到數字和運氣, 總會想起8或6等;而相反第二段反對這種觀點則不好構思例子。
快捷構思
第一段:在模板句引入話題后接著提出首段中心“有些人認為 某些數字會帶來好運”。而后“一句話”數例為具體現車牌號含有“ 8 ”這個數字,希望自己能走運。
第二段:開門見山展現段落中心“有些人認為數字和運氣無i關”,并用 Numbers alone can never bring good luck to a person at all without his real efforts 來支持這個觀點。
第三段:直接展現自己的觀點,并提出一個簡要的原因•• Opportunities are only for the prepared mind.
優美短語
1.cater to psychological need 滿足心理上的需求
2.purely misleading 完全誤導人的
3.real efforts 真正的努力(優于 hard work)
4.just to get a disappointing result 而僅僅得到一個失望的結果(不定式在這里表結果,是絕大部分同學不會主動使用 的表達)
5. Opportunities are only for the prepared mind.機會留給有準備的人。