2017年英語四級作文預測(一)：老年人孤獨生活

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

　　Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at “herself” in the mirror and saying to herself, “I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school.”

　　首句功能為：引出圖畫;之后為圖畫內容描述，主要是四要素：人/物、動作、文字和環境，寫出四要素中的兩三點即可。

　　Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children’s accompany for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness, it is advisable for their children to spend more time in parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it difficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is adult children's accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.

　　二段首句：圖畫聯系主題;之后if句為圖畫簡單評論;in contemporary society一句為圖畫所暗含的社會現象;meanwhile一句為相關人+具體感受;however之后為強調句式，論述意義;尾句是萬能總結。

　　As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to love, respect and care all elderly people. (196 words)

　　尾段首句：觀點;二句建議;尾句展望未來。

　　2017年英語四級作文預測(二)：網上購物

　　1. 近來在一些發達地區出現網上購物熱。

　　2. 一些人喜歡網上購物。

　　3. 另一些人不喜歡網上購物。

　　考點分析：

　　本文屬對比分析類議論文，也有人將其歸類于對比比較類或匹配對比類作文。此類作文要求對同種或兩種事物進行比較，然后得出結論。嚴格地說比較類的作文一般要求比較一件事物正反、優劣等，然后下結論，而對比類作文大多是對兩個事物或兩種觀點從兩方面進行比較，再提出自己的看法。

　　本文實際上是從客觀公正的角度對比網上購物與傳統購物。文章首先指出如今網絡時代我們在網上無所不能，網上購物悄然受到人們青睞。隨即圍繞網上購物這一中心議題提出兩種不同態度。一些人喜歡網上購物，他們認為與傳統購物方式相比，它快捷、方便、省時，選擇面大。實際上他們是拿網上購物的長處比傳統購物的短處。而另一些人對此不感興趣，他們對假冒偽劣產品十分謹慎，很怕上當受騙。這些人是拿傳統購物長處比網上購物的短處，最后作者得出結論：網上購物勢必會發展成不可抗拒的新的購物趨勢。

　　審題構思

　　“網上購物“屬提綱式作文。根據題中所給漢語提示句提示，本文可用三段式的謀篇形式。開篇段照應提綱開門見山地指出目前不僅出現了“上網熱”，而且出現了“網上購物熱”――Nowadays many people tend to shop on the net。隨后在第二和第三段中闡明對網上購物的兩種不同觀點，并就此展開討論。最后用一句話得出結論。因此第二段的主題句應為：Some people prefer this new way of shopping。第三段主題句為：Others dislike the new trend of shopping。結論為：I believe it is an irresistible trend of shopping in the 21st century。全文和各段落具體框架結構如下：

　　全文構思

　　1. Nowadays many people tend to shop on the Net.

　　2. Some people prefer this new way of shopping.

　　3. Others dislike the new trend of shopping.

　　段落構思

　　第一段：Topic Sentence: Nowadays many people tend to shop on the Net.

　　Developing Sentence 1: Internet is revolutionizing our world.

　　Developing Sentence 2: We can do many things online.

　　第二段： Topic Sentence: Some people prefer this new way of shopping..

　　Developing Sentence: convenient and time-saving

　　第三段： Topic Sentence: Others dislike the new trend of shopping.

　　Developing Sentence: Fear of buying fake commodities

　　范文：

　　Nowadays Internet is revolutionizing our world and greatly facilitating our modern life. As a matter of fact, we can do almost everything on the net. To illustrate, we can conduct E-business, advertise our products, book an air ticket, buy and sell stocks, even hunt job on the web. Recently, shopping on the Net is gradually becoming popular in modern cities. However, people take different attitudes towards the new way of shopping.

　　Some people who prefer shopping on the virtual shopping centers or the e-commerce portals, hold that the new way of shopping has many advantages. First, the web-stores can keep customers updated about the best selling products. Besides, they can provide customers with a wider range of choices. Most important of all, it is very convenient and time-saving. People can stay at home shopping whatever they want online.

　　However, others who stick to shopping in the real –life stores have their reasons. First, they argue that though time-saving, it’s a little bit complicated to pay on the Web. Besides, they think that customers can never rest assured of the quality of the commodities unless they see them with their own eyes. Finally, they believe the best way to be on guard against the fake and poor quality commodities is to shop in the traditional way. Therefore, they don’t show any interest in shopping online. However, more and more people will prefer shopping on the Web. And it’s believed that it will eventually be an irresistible trend of shopping in the 21st century.

　　新詞拾貝

　　online 網上，在線

　　on the Web/ Net 網上

　　website 網站

　　web page 網頁

　　e-commerce 電子商務

　　e-business 電子商務

　　virtual shopping center 網上虛構的購物中心

　　絕妙銜接

　　Nowadays, … As a matter of fact, … To illustrate, … However, …

　　Some … First, … besides, … Most important of all, …

　　However, others … First, … Besides, … Finally, … However, …

　　良好開端

　　Nowadays Internet is revolutionizing our world and greatly facilitating our modern life, so that we can do many things on the Net.

　　Nowadays, with the arrival of knowledge economy age, we can do many things on the Web, such as conducting e-business, buying and selling stocks and even shopping at home via the Internet.

　　Nowadays, we can do many things via Internet. To illustrate, we can conduct e-commerce, buy and sell stocks, buy train or air tickets and even shop on the Net.

　　Nowadays, shopping at home via Internet is becoming popular in many parts of the country.

　　成功收口

　　Therefore, they don't think it's the best way to shop on the Web.

　　Therefore, they doubt whether its advantages can outweigh its disadvantages, hence, they still continue their old practice.

　　Therefore, they didn't show any interest in online shopping.

　　Therefore, they find it difficult to adopt the new way of shopping and still stick to he old way.

　　2017年英語四級作文預測(三)：量體裁衣

　　Directions: Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in which you should

　　1) describe the cartoon,

　　2) interpret its meaning, and

　　3) point out its implications in our life.

　　范文1：

　　This cartoon is silly, and yet compelling: a large customer holds a hopelessly small piece of cloth as the tailor carefully measures. Such an image suggests that one needs to consider practical reality in the pursuance of goals. Merely acting on one's desires, while ignoring the facts at hand, cannot lead to success.

　　The fact that currently there are more graduates than jobs reminds us of the importance of rational thinking. Every year approximately 3 million students graduate from universities and begin looking for work. Many of them fail to find suitable employment because there are simply not enough opportunities to accommodate such great numbers of graduates. In addition, however, one might also cite flawed individual assessment as a reason.

　　In order to create a realistic target for one's future, one must make rational decisions and prepare accordingly. A student who aims to be a surgeon, for example, must take care to acquire opportunities to do clinical practice and gain sufficient knowledge. In other words, customers would do well to take accurate measurements before purchasing their fabric. A small piece of cloth cannot adequately clothe a large person.

　　譯文：

　　這幅畫很可笑，但引人注目。一位身體龐大的顧客在裁縫仔細地為他量尺寸準備做衣服時，手里卻拿著一塊小得令人絕望的衣料。這幅畫告訴我們，一個人在執行任務的過程中必須考慮到實際情況，僅從主觀意愿出發而不顧眼前的事實，是不可能成功的。

　　當前大學生的就業率使我們意識到進行合理思考的重要性，每年有大約300萬大學生從學校畢業，尋找工作，他們中的很多人并沒有找到一份適合自己的工作，有一個原因是沒有足夠的就業機會提供給數量如此龐大的畢業生。但除此而外，過高的自我估計也是可能的原因之一。

　　為了能夠實現未來目標，一個人必須做出合理的決定，并做好相應的準備。比如一個志在成為外科醫生的學生，就必須確保自己有臨床實習的機會和足夠的知識，換句話說，顧客在購買衣料前必須先量好準確的尺寸，一個大塊頭是無法穿上一小塊布料的。

　　范文2：

　　In the cartoon we can see a large person being measured by a tailor to get suitable clothes made. Anything to be done must be measured in advance so that we are able to find a proper way to do it. If the tailor does not take measurements of the man, then he would not be able to make suitable clothes for this person.

　　This same principle applies to solving any other problem. Firstly, when we want to know the reality of something, we must describe it like it is, getting rid of our prejudices and exaggerations, so that we can have an unbiased view. Secondly, the object should be analyzed in a concrete way so that we can grasp the reasons and rules of it. Thirdly, we must adapt our approach to solving a problem, for each situation is different from the others. So we must view a problem from different perspectives.

　　The cartoon implies different meanings to different people. A teacher should adopt different teaching methods according to the students in the class; a doctor should prescribe different treatments according to the patient's symptoms; a farmer should seed different plants according to the various conditions of the earth. From a philosophical point of view, dissimilarproblems should be approached differently. Good results come from attentive analysis of a problem.

　　譯文：

　　從圖中我們可以看到，一個裁縫正在給一位身材高大的人量身定做一件合適的衣服。在做任何事情都應該預先籌劃，以便找到恰當的解決辦法。如果這個裁縫不為這個人量尺寸，他就不能為他做出一件合適的衣服。

　　這個道理同樣適合解決其它任何問題。首先，當我們要了解某事的真相時，我們必須如實地對其描述，排除任何偏見與夸張，以便我們能夠得到真實的情況。其次，具體事物要具體分析，這樣我們才能夠抓住事物的規律。最后，事物的狀態是不斷變化的，所以我們應當“因地制宜，同時制宜。”總之，我們要從不同的角度看待問題。

　　圖畫的內涵對不同的人有著不同的意義。對于教師來說，面對不同的學生要采取不同的教學方法;對于醫生來說，要根據病人的不同病情采用相應的治療方法;對于農民來說，面對不同的土地狀況要種植不同的作物。從哲學角度來說，具體問題要具體分析。好的結果總是來自對問題的仔細分析。

　　以上兩篇范文從圖中看到的以及表達的都不盡相同，由此可見，看圖作文也不一定要完全符合出題者的意愿，只要是普遍意義上說得通的都是可以的。

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